not a bad start
has some hot moments
doesn't entirely escape the 'you' problem
by
Anonymous07/12/05
Excellent
An excellent, yet quick vingnette, perfectly capturing the power struggle that I so thoroughly enjoy. BDSM isn't always about the pain, it can mean so much more. Breaking a person's ego and having them fall into utter supplication is what has always attracted me to it.
One of the other big attractions to this story is the grammatical correctness. There is a clear attention to the craft and execution that shows a loving care and the authoress's ability to overcome her own urges long enough to put them to paper.
The other joy of this story is the shortness. There is nothing but the business elements. It is like a Hitchcock film, where every prop on the set is used or it is not there. Being a devout (mental) sadist, I don't care what this woman's job is. I don't care why the man is taking a shower. I just want to see him bend her to his will.
English
Hot, passionate, raw.
Great little story, I could feel the frustration and the pent up energy in the writing. Very well done. Thanks for such a hot read!
mmmmm
2hot, 2hot
Great Beginning
Loved the tension of the beginning.. end seemed a bit disappointing
good
not a bad start
has some hot moments
doesn't entirely escape the 'you' problem
Excellent
An excellent, yet quick vingnette, perfectly capturing the power struggle that I so thoroughly enjoy. BDSM isn't always about the pain, it can mean so much more. Breaking a person's ego and having them fall into utter supplication is what has always attracted me to it.
One of the other big attractions to this story is the grammatical correctness. There is a clear attention to the craft and execution that shows a loving care and the authoress's ability to overcome her own urges long enough to put them to paper.
The other joy of this story is the shortness. There is nothing but the business elements. It is like a Hitchcock film, where every prop on the set is used or it is not there. Being a devout (mental) sadist, I don't care what this woman's job is. I don't care why the man is taking a shower. I just want to see him bend her to his will.
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