All Comments on 'A Walk in the Woods'

by AlinaX

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Jealous

I was so jealous of the protagonist. Really neat story. I hope there is a sequel.

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 6 years agoAuthor

I'll think about it. Could be fun.

Thanks for commenting! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I like your style

I like how the protagonist has fairly realistic and rational thoughts about the whole situation. Especially her disappointment at his name, and the fact that going barefoot in the woods hurts. Little details like that. This was a good read~

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 6 years agoAuthor

I was feeling a little guilty about her reaction to the name, so I love that you liked that.

Thanks for reading!

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 5 years agoAuthor

Glad you enjoyed it! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great story

Please keep writing maybe a part 2 soon

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 5 years agoAuthor

Thanks - but I don't really know how to. But who knows. I'll think about it.

cindyp1976cindyp1976over 4 years ago
more please

please keep writing and make this story a series

Jennyclark1409Jennyclark1409almost 4 years ago
Well done!

I agree with all of the comments that I have read..a 2nd/3rd/4th episode of this would be amazing! So please consider it!

I'd love to find out about... her transformation/ if he becomes a permanent mate/ if she is now pregnant/ how this affects her life/ more about

Greg/ is he from a pack & what happens when they find out what he has done.

I hope that you're able to continue this.

Thanks very much,

Jenny xxx

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 4 years agoAuthor

You guys...

Okay. Thanks for the ideas. I'll play with them a little and see where they take me.

StrixalucoStrixalucoabout 2 years ago

I like how you describe her not so rational thinking while drunk, and using it to make her reactions to a naked guy in the woods believable.

740gordy740gordy8 months ago

Wow, first read of you, for me. Erotically animalistic, or animalistically erotic, pick one. This certainly won’t be the last read, nicely done. Thank you.

Blackpaw29Blackpaw294 months ago

That final line is hilarious as is the cynical self-knowing way you write her POV, love it.

AlinaXAlinaX4 months agoAuthor

Always gives me a chuckle too, thanks. :-)

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