All Comments on 'Need'

by VGracen

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unfairplayunfairplayalmost 16 years ago
Great Story!

I really liked it, so romantic!

ronia5lmfronia5lmfover 15 years ago
Very Sweet

This was so romantic. It reminds me of my Master. Thank you for the enjoyable story. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Wow..

I teared up a little thinking about the same longing i have felt. Great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Can Use Some Work

Great job writing, but there's hardly a plot to it. Maybe a couple twists and more description would do it. You set up a very good beginning, but in the actual erotic part you didn't do much. Just some things to think about.

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