All Comments on 'Mom Needs a Baby'

by MarshalMarmont1815

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Mom a contortionist

She places her mouth around my cock as I pushed into her.... How does she do that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
no way

ass to puss, are you nuts or is it you do not care? make it sound like real love.

homerjayhomerjayalmost 6 years ago
not bad

rushed, decent sex, needs some proof reading.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Really?

He slammed into her womb! How old are you, phuqing 15? It’s possible for him to slam into the mouth of her cervix but not her phuqing womb! Either someone didn’t pay attention or was asleep during Sex Education class.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good descriptions

Whether it's eight babies at once or eight babies over the course of a decade. A son is sure to pump his Mom full of his siblings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Funniest Sex Story

I have no words to explain you're story but as being funny, I can't take it seriously even if I tried with how rushed it is and how at some part things don't add up , octuplets? like come on now let's be realistic here at least for once , anyways it shows you had fun writing this but you left your readers out of this completely by not re-reading what you wrote

C_frommnC_frommnover 5 years ago
You

Would think Mom & Son would continue to make Dad a "cuck" until she had 2 or 3 kid' s .That should be enough for dad to work overtime. and Give Mom and her second Husband time to enjoy each other.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Yummy

Nice big titties for son and new baby

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
My 2 cents

I know this is fiction, but it is over the top.

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Good story, like it a lot. AAAA++++

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

As loud as she was screaming dad didn't wake up?and believed she was pregnant by him?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
Big time exageration in this story

NOT erotic!

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123over 1 year ago

"Mom Needs A Baby:"

Normally I do not care for any type of "stroke story" that has the subject and theme of blood-kin, DNA-related incest. In the real world of incest and the reality of legal risks and societal exposures of incest being "outed" is not stroke-story material.....with the exception being in the mind of the writer and the reader.

Being that I have a great appreciation for the tribulations of true love and romance of actual incestuous couples, I don't look kindly at writer's using the inclusion of incest just to grab the attention of pornographic "stroke stories."

However, this story is written with some degree of levity, humor and head-scratching degrees of inaccuracies. For the most part, I read this story while grinning throughout and with a "grain of salt." Additionally, I was drawn to read the story due to the female, Tommy's mother, was impregnated--which is my great turn-on. Tommy's father being cuckolded--even to the point of Tommy's father believing that HE (the father) was the one impregnating his wife.....not!!! Here's hoping Tommy becomes a father at least half dozen more times, with his mother being the oven for their babies!

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore1981about 1 month ago

Another story that insults the guy he gets his mom pregnant and he can't even claim it that's a insult to a man I'm sorry but if I get a woman pregnant I'm not going to pretend it's not mine I'm going to claim it and I am not going to care who likes it and who don't for I'm a real man not some little bitch

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