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Wow
I loved that story. I'm sitting here amazed by the way you can put those thoughts and feelings into words.
-Ill
WONDERFUL WORK
The word is inexperienced. The word is savor. The word is realized. The word is realizing. The word is eons. The word is sweet, I believe. The story was wonderful a few words were misspelled but it did not take away from the telling of the story. I love vampire tales, stories and this I APPUALD WITH GREAT ENTHUSIAM. I hope to write something as entertaining as this piece was, someday.
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