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Richie4110Richie4110almost 6 years ago
Not much story

I don't believe you intended to offer a story as much as create sex scene. You obviously have some writing skills and I encourage you to try more with the story line and keep the sex to a supporting role. Just my thoughts.

I wish you well on your future efforts.

Thanks

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