All Comments on 'The Bliss of Darkness'

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astronomo2060astronomo2060almost 6 years ago
amazing

well this story is so good, Kurt got what he deserved, lol, do you accept prompts?

buzzie1969buzzie1969almost 6 years ago
hot

hot story man, well written

sonofcupidsonofcupidalmost 6 years ago

this is one of my favorite stories I've read on the site. great work! i came twice during this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great story

This is really a great story!

I haven't read many that were so good about werewolf sex. Nicely balanced and quite a page-turner too. For a short story, I found impressive the way you managed to build and develop your characters. I really hope to read more from you!

Thank you so much for sharing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Dark fairytale

It’s like those old cautionary fairytales only with lots of sex. Very cool.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Just dessert

A prologue where Kurt kind of coerces Kyle into starting this incestuous relationship would be great. Not coerce so much as take advantage of Kyle's teenage libido

Then the epilogue would be even sweeter. I liked the story but the epilogue is what really gave it 5 star for me. This is so well written and developed for a short story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Another chapter

Please! One where his brother finally turns him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Holy shit!

This was an AWESOME story! It was hot hot HOT! But it was also really creative and original. I almost bowed out with the knuckle hair but I was glad I didnt. I didn't see Kyle turning out like that but honestly it's kind of perfect that he did. Loved it. Great great job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Please, continue the story!

This story was really good, we need more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Awesome read

Why would you do that to your brother? He already had Max. I guess he wanted the best of both worlds!

softbrat_softbrat_about 2 years ago

Bro... This checks SO many boxes for me. And the fact it doesn't end with some cliche happy ending makes it all the better.

Calico75Calico758 months ago

Wow. Tragic really. No one wins.

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I'm just a guy with a wild imagination who likes to put it on vitual paper. After channeling ideas to fan fiction for some time, I've turned my hand to original stories and characters. Though I try to keep things as realistic and believable as possible, I do believe fiction, n...