All Comments on 'Did She or Didn't She?'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What a pile of crap!

One page, poorly written, bull shit crap.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Lost me

Probably best that could happen.

TediumsShadowTediumsShadowover 5 years ago
enjoyed it

thanks for writing and posting

Impo_64Impo_64over 5 years ago
The big issue with this story...

The big issue with this story: He was a "friend that was not especially close" and even so they talked about their private life like old buddies? Then to a "not especially close" mand he says: "I trust you both"? Really? Not just "I trust you (referring his wife)"? 2*

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wished this was a more detailed story

A person gets up to dance and there is no music Just too much left out of this one

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I don't think

You will make 62 married, but you didn't want to anyway

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Garbage

ONE STAR

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
lame

lame

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
5! GREAT STORY~!! We all know if Annony

hates a story it's a good one. See annony is fucking insane. His wife fucked over a 100 guys and then told this cuck and fag she did it on her death bed. Annony. lost his mind thinking of all the cum he had eating ou9t of her pussy

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
That was simply awful

Knock on the neighbor's door and instead of borrowing a cup of sugar, borrow his wife? Ridiculous drivel.

fisheronefisheroneover 5 years ago
Needed second chapter

I would like for husband to stake his claim like never before. Also for husband to realize how special wife is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Of course she did it!

That's what the wimp husband wanted when he asked her to escort another man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I had a problem with this story

It was too short. I loved the way you built up tension with the husband imagining all sorts of naughty things happening. My husband has told me many times that while I am out to dinner or drinks with some of my friends, he's home imagining me in the arms of another man. Some of his stories from his silly head would rival the best stories here. I hope you will publish more stories like this and hopefully they will be a lot longer.

S.

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerover 5 years ago
Good, but could be better!

Not bad, or at least I didn’t spot any major goofs. I must say, “You’ve really turned out a lot for the short time you’ve been posting—keep it up.

Of course you have the usual poison pen remarks from the crowd that can’t define just what they don’t like about stories. I suspect that’s because they have no idea about what’s included in good creative writing.

I think Impo_64 is spot on with his comments, and you could have given more suspense with the ‘did she or didn’t she’ aspect. Maybe the car broke down, maybe she spilled something on her clothes requiring her to come home wearing something she didn’t leave wearing. There are any number of ways to do it, but hubby should be walking the floor and cussing himself by the time he hears her key in the front door lock. Good luck! cd

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nope

The only poison pen is Carolina, his sissy boy pathetic rants are fitting for a creampie eating loser like him. I will still punch his worthless ass in the throat for lying about being a Marine, he is full of shit. This story was OK, lacking in any real drama or confrontation. The dialogue was well done, but please build the character's with some more tension as I would love to see how hubby reacts to maybe a lie or even the terrible truth.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

so she will soon be another wife whore fucking the neighbor

patilliepatillieover 5 years ago
Trying to be funny but failed

YOur attitude is quite cavalier towards your wife.....but maybe that is just the result of sharing her all those swinging years. Kind of a turnoff.

trandall9991trandall9991over 5 years ago
Horrible

Sorry but a Real Husband doesn't do this type of thing. In fact he fights for his wife all the time. Sorry but I almost puked my lunch up over this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Trash at its finest. 1* for this garbage

Complete trash and waste of time....well at least this lame story is quite short and just made me waste three minutes of my time.

What stupid pathetic nonsense wimp brainless tale!

1* for this crap.

TwentysevenTwentysevenover 5 years ago
Nice Change

I think you are copping a lot of unnecessary stick. I thought this was quite well done and certainly a nice change from the usual predictable stroke jobs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
hmm..

He whored his wife out for a lawnmower but should have held out for the edger/trimmer.

dispatcher59dispatcher59over 5 years ago
I liked it

The uncertainty at the end makes for an interesting ending. A stunning ending would be if she was standing there telling him about the ice cream, etc, and a streak of white slowly slides down her thigh. Chapter 2: sloppy seconds??

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not unbelievable.

Sounds like she did . I was in a smiliar position , my wife 40 , the close friend who took her as his guest to his annual company dinner dance , a few years older . He divorced . I know apart from a goodnight kiss , nothing happened . I was happy for her to go with him .

I liked this story .

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchover 5 years ago
Old concept, you did OK with it

Not a fetish I appreciate or am likely to defend.

BIG turnoff for me to find out a party to a relationship does things for the toy that they don't do for the spouse. In this case dressing up well. Ruined it for me.

OT positive side, you avoided all the racial, SPH, and bitchy crap that makes most cuck stories trash, thank and keep them coming Please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
WIFE

They stopped for \\\a icecream, but brought hubby home a cream pie to enjoy.

spankmeaginspankmeaginover 5 years ago
Careful what you dream...

Hmmm it was really her wet panties she was slipping into her purse!

Time for sloppy seconds my friend,

and light that spark.

Bottoms up, spankmeagin

MightyHornyMightyHornyover 5 years ago
Anything to get a boner... but not that, grampa

If the only way you can get an erection is imagining your woman fucking the neighbor behind your back...

You have some issues, old man.

One sadass stor, I tell ya. ★★

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
JUST PLAIN STUPID

Completely unrealistic! PLAIN BULLSHIT!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
look for it

easy enough to figure out if she did or didn't. Have her strip down bare naked and look yourself. Any husband will know if she has had intercourse or not. The blow job? That will be tough to tell and I wouldn't want to check that out myself. Just assume YES she at least sucked him off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
wrong section

over the proverbial hill = mature

iameaseliameaselover 2 years ago

Wow, who here could imagine that this was going to be a really shitty story?

Raise your hands up high in the back so I can see them.

Yup, pretty much everyone.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

whore and wimp.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

She lied and cheated. Time for a divorce.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Cucky wimpy writer, as expected.

kirei8kirei85 days ago

Boring! Quit after a few paragraphs

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