All Comments on 'Her Roommate's Visitor'

by thekestrelkid

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Mostly good

Just got a little rapey for my tastes

blade_rocknutblade_rocknutover 5 years ago

Not usually into coercion or unwillingness, but this was well done and hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Grammar

You need a proofreader. There are too many mistakes that it detracts from the content.

zazrix9zazrix9over 4 years ago
Not

rapey enough for me

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous