I like the story., it is hot, but I think you could have more stuff going on. Make it a bit deeper. Seems like you ran out of steam after the first interruption. Maybe if they make a n attempt to hide. If the couple goes behind the door, and start to fuck standing up. The husband comes into the room and tells the wife, there are no crazy people in the bedroom, closing the door, winking at heather and our guy..
you notice he is sporting a hard on as he tells his wife he wants to go now.
We think he's gone, as our couple goes back to the bed, bouncing, this time with heather on top.. I don't know.
The man comes back, claiming he forgot something, and says something to the couple, wanting a lick, a suck for hiding them and keeping their secret.
He is gone again.
I don't know.
I like the story but it seems like a beginning as it is.
English
Needed a little more
Would love to see Heather house hunting again with some of the others coming in to join in the fun.
more of a situation than a story
I like the story., it is hot, but I think you could have more stuff going on. Make it a bit deeper. Seems like you ran out of steam after the first interruption. Maybe if they make a n attempt to hide. If the couple goes behind the door, and start to fuck standing up. The husband comes into the room and tells the wife, there are no crazy people in the bedroom, closing the door, winking at heather and our guy..
you notice he is sporting a hard on as he tells his wife he wants to go now.
We think he's gone, as our couple goes back to the bed, bouncing, this time with heather on top.. I don't know.
The man comes back, claiming he forgot something, and says something to the couple, wanting a lick, a suck for hiding them and keeping their secret.
He is gone again.
I don't know.
I like the story but it seems like a beginning as it is.
i justed loved it.
best story i've read in along time.
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