start of another standard run-of-the-mill cheating wife story.
What about a bit of imagination???
Oh, sorry to ask too much.
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Anonymous03/14/05
Zoeloves
Very hot and well written. Keep it coming. SUM12WATCH.
by
Anonymous03/15/05
Great start
Great start, Melody. Too early to tell where it is going, but it was very pleasant to sit back and get to know your characters. Not a lot of that going on at Literotica.
Take your time. Don't listen to ANYBODY, pro or con. Enjoy the experience and that will assure that we will too.
As long as they exchange stories and nothing more they can be as sexual as they like. But, they tell me, it is still cheating. Thinking of cheating is the same as doing it!
Well, we'll keep an eye on this one.
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Anonymous03/15/05
well
please continue and we shall see if it remains fantasy or not...
Nice set-up for a possibly good story line. Or, it could be just another "rehashed" frustrated loving wife who needs a "different" bed partner.
I hope the writer has thought this one through to the end. One more chapter should tell us where the story is headed.
English
Good start
Nice start to the story. I'd hate to see Joe die, or be hurt by Zoe's infatuation with her boss, however.
magnificent
fantastic storyline - please give us more
Here we go again
start of another standard run-of-the-mill cheating wife story.
What about a bit of imagination???
Oh, sorry to ask too much.
Zoeloves
Very hot and well written. Keep it coming. SUM12WATCH.
Great start
Great start, Melody. Too early to tell where it is going, but it was very pleasant to sit back and get to know your characters. Not a lot of that going on at Literotica.
Take your time. Don't listen to ANYBODY, pro or con. Enjoy the experience and that will assure that we will too.
Virtual, right?
As long as they exchange stories and nothing more they can be as sexual as they like. But, they tell me, it is still cheating. Thinking of cheating is the same as doing it!
Well, we'll keep an eye on this one.
well
please continue and we shall see if it remains fantasy or not...
Enticing...maybe
Nice set-up for a possibly good story line. Or, it could be just another "rehashed" frustrated loving wife who needs a "different" bed partner.
I hope the writer has thought this one through to the end. One more chapter should tell us where the story is headed.
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