All Comments on 'Peter and His Neighbours'

by Jack1107

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Poor

I am afraid that your story is too confusing, with poor english, not a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
If Only

Oh, if only it were that easy.

illwindillwindover 5 years ago

First comment pretty much summed it up. This is just a mess. Not so much a story as it is a jumble of random thoughts.

chytownchytownover 5 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
You write porn like an email

see title

goatman96goatman96about 2 years ago

Interesting subject - terrible writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Know both types of men. Like hairy like shaved.

I like hairy pussy and don't mind hairy underarms. Many women in my youth quit shaving underarms as got older.

Your writing is a mess as others comments. Keep reading to see if get better due to comments. Don't!

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