All Comments on 'Expanding Horizons'

You are a beautiful writer! Please keep up the amazing, delicious work.

Best story ever. Congratulations

Reading this on the day of the blood moon in July, and now I'm more than ready to send out some salutations of love/lust and new horizons for the coming months and decades.

Keep up with this story, but do not be swinged by your new fans request. You so you and keep us panting.

There are a lot of hacks here. You are a WRITER. Keep doing that.

I was very impressed with the quality of writing and the details that you conveyed in your story. From a personal standpoint, I felt at times the story became a bit verbose. But I think that may your writing style so don’t change a thing. Can’t wait to read more of your work.

Nothing makes me cum harder than well written erotica... and this is no exception. I furtherly enjoyed reading this fantastic story, good job! Please write more :)

The best story I've read here! It's definitely my fav now! Keep writing such pieces, thank you

I have been patiently awaiting the shower scene ;)

Please write the next chapter.

Enthralling build-up and graphic description. I'm not sure it's humanly possible for Chris to withstand the sensations of Rachel's mouth and pussy without cumming, but it was very erotic. I hope there will be a sequel with Rachel and Tracy expanding their horizons together and with Chris.

Wonderfully intense and erotic and I loved the equality in their passion and leadership