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The Truth About One Moment

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by LadyJeanne03/10/05

Stirring

ending. The last stanza was very powerful and really makes the poem. I know of whence you speak. Thank you. LJ.

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by Bridget6903/11/05

Powerful.

It's unfortunate how sometimes passion can turn into aggression. A very sobering piece.

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