If this goes where I think it will I will be a true fan for life.Keep up the stellar plot line
by
Anonymous04/12/05
Fantastically written and just plain---WOW!
Everything in this story gets your juices flowing. Keep writing--this stuff is a great cure for anyone with any problem getting it up and in!
by
Anonymous05/11/05
Confused By Meaning or Purpose Of Tape
Looks compliant not forced - where's the beef?
by
Anonymous11/10/07
Really good shit lickin
That was great..LOL! I loved the part where Susan was tongue fucking Lori's rectum, tasting, sucking and licking her anus, literally eating her shit along with Terry's cum. I could definitely identify with having my asshole "eaten" like that as well by a VERY horny, compulsive girl. She had to do it...eat my shit, I mean. I sat on her face and let her lick my anus until I could relax the sphincter enough to let her tongue in. IT WAS GREAT...the feeling of her tongue but also knowing she was tasting my shit!
Keep them coming
Waiting for the next chapter.
nice read
well written waiting for the next chapter
nice read
well written waiting for the next chapter
Kinky & good!
What will happen to Susan?? Oh, I can't wait!!!
very nicely done
If this goes where I think it will I will be a true fan for life.Keep up the stellar plot line
Fantastically written and just plain---WOW!
Everything in this story gets your juices flowing. Keep writing--this stuff is a great cure for anyone with any problem getting it up and in!
Confused By Meaning or Purpose Of Tape
Looks compliant not forced - where's the beef?
Really good shit lickin
That was great..LOL! I loved the part where Susan was tongue fucking Lori's rectum, tasting, sucking and licking her anus, literally eating her shit along with Terry's cum. I could definitely identify with having my asshole "eaten" like that as well by a VERY horny, compulsive girl. She had to do it...eat my shit, I mean. I sat on her face and let her lick my anus until I could relax the sphincter enough to let her tongue in. IT WAS GREAT...the feeling of her tongue but also knowing she was tasting my shit!
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