Very enjoyable to read about the slow seduction to submission. Thank you for your time and effort in writing this story.
Woof! (Fanning myself) That was good. With just a few paragraphs, you've created sexual tension so thick it can be cut with a knife. Very much looking forward to where you're going to go with this. Well done.
I had really liked the first one and was waiting for the next, which was just as good as the first. I know the 3rd will just be even better!
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Great story so far.
Very enjoyable to read about the slow seduction to submission. Thank you for your time and effort in writing this story.
Very good
Woof! (Fanning myself)
That was good. With just a few paragraphs, you've created sexual tension so thick it can be cut with a knife.
Very much looking forward to where you're going to go with this.
Well done.
Can't wait for Segment #3
I had really liked the first one and was waiting for the next, which was just as good as the first. I know the 3rd will just be even better!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Finding Mr. Wrong Ch. 02 or
More submissions by peacefulwhisper.