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good story
Your story is well written and fun to read. A question: while she was on the internet, why didn't she email her family?
AWESOME
Please keep on writing, its one of the finest specimens of romance on literotica. I look forward to the developement of the story.
It's just a sex story
It's just another sex story. Like someone said why didn't she email her family? Assuming her whole family was illiterate on using the computer, what about her college mates or friends? Ok assuming she does not have friends and her college mate hates her, I am sure she can emailed her college? Would she still wants to go back to America when it was obvious she enjoyed his making love so much already in such a short time?
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I have the same question as those below...but moreover since this seems to be "novelish" why don't you dive more into the characters?!?! Just a thought. Hope to read more :)
Can't Wait to Read More
I think this story is great so far. I can't wait to read more. As far as sending an e-mail, why would she risk him finding out and getting mad at her. He really is treating her well. I also get the feeling she is kind of enjoying the attention from him. She seems to like his family as well.
Bollocks
If she doesn't want to get him mad then she should not even bother to find out where she was and where is the nearest airport! She still plan to run away as she said. So planning to run away won't make him angry but sending an email will make him angry? Bollocks!
Teen love story with hardcore sex thrown in
Started off well in first chapter then story line becoming weak. I would say this story is more for teens with slightly more sex scene thrown in. Her heroine is rather a hypocrite. About three weeks into her stay here and she can't wait for him to get into her panties. The using of the computer was the most weak excuse when you could easily emailed any help centre for rescue.
Great Story
I love this story. It's one of the best I've read on here. It's very romantic and very hot! Please keep up the good work. Great job :-)
Excellent....
loved the way your story is going, i do tend to like them longer but, since i came in late i had "chapters" to catch up on so its no big deal...You are quickly heading right up there with my most fav and second fav female authors in literotica...DanielleKitten and haremgirl...have you read any of their stuff? i think you might like it if you like to read as well as write. i had started reading literotica for the bdsm stories and then just got addicted to the other subjects also, and so glad i did...i truly enjoy your writing. Thanks for taking the time and using your talent to allow us to read something well written and enjoyable. Merry Christmas respectfully fan in Texas naynay
She didn't email her family cause...
It's obvious that the protagonist has mixed feelings about whether or not she really wants to be with Khadeem. There are many romance stories/novels where a woman is in a kidnap/capture situation and gets seduced by her captor and has ambivalence about her situation. That's why people!
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