All Comments on 'What Mom Doesn't Know Ch. 01'

Love it. More please

We're going to need another chapter or two. Good proofreading.

Thanks and keep writing.

Hope you do have a second or subsequent story.

It could be fun for her to seduce all of her X-Stepdads.

I am trying to write a series of a stepdaughter and her stepdad. However he did not know that the now college age girl wasn't his. His wife blurted it out in a rage and then life changes for the always loving Dad and his now very sexy daughter. She seduces him. Love to get your input as I like the way you addressed the subject.

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I loved your story! I hope you write the next chapter where she shows her shaved little pussy to step daddy.

Guys drooling here thinking they can get some hot pussy. I write from a female perspective and laugh my heart out out the comments I receive.

Great story. 5+

Good story, well written and hot.

Keep up the good work

AWESOME STORY

Hope you continue the story.

One of the best. Your writing is fantastic and very realistic.

I like the story. The girl has a naive quality, but it is disappearing quickly. I hope there is a follow on.

5 stars

I really appreciate all the comments, and all of the favorites!

Thank you all so much. There are more chapters waiting to be published and probably a lot more to come. As for having her seduce her other stepfathers, well there was only one and as it's sort of based on my own experience he idea of seducing him is kind of....ew.

Her naivete reflects what I recall of being that age. You have this odd mental mix of childishness and adulthood. It's strange but exactly how I remember that time being. I think her innocence and teenage attitude (like saying "duh" ) makes it realistic and sexy. At least I hope so because it's based on how I was as at eighteen.

Male or female author? Does it really matter? I see no comments here trying to get in my digital pants so I'm not sure why this is a question.

I have seen many male authors write from the female perspective and pull it off perfectly

I am female. Does this change the story? Not really. Are the fans going to get any hot pussy? Well, they could always join my discord or become a patron on Patreon in which case, yes, they'd get a few lovely pussy shots. .

Lovely, hot story. I've written one story from an eighteen year old woman's perspective, although I'm a guy. I tried to incorporate that blend of childlike feeling and adult craving that you put into this story. It's what I imagined and eighteen year old woman would think like. I'm glad to see I was on the right track.

a fun story, cute but not too cute where one would think she was underage or simple-minded

cute and sexy. i liked it!!!

Damn that was hot and sexy!! Thanks for sharing.

Great story. Teen stepdaughter swallowed her first load of stepdads cum.

Amazing work here! You've got me hooked. Sexy and hot, but not over the top, can't wait to read the rest!

Lol she came in like 2 seconds from him touching her. You deflated the mood pretty quickly with that funny departure from reality

It's A hot story

I LOvE that he prefers her to mom. The sneaky little link behind mom’s back. How he prefers her pussy to mom’s. Please write more