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you have some great lines;
"have a Brobdingnagian breakfast,
...
bathing in the brackish neon brilliance,
...
when "swoosh" comes to shove."
but I have trouble following what this is about
basketball?
Lots of neat images. :)
interesting
Some wonderful lines
this read was like a pin ball
darting from one visual to another
basicly the deep breath before heading
into it all you need at least 4
to make the proper blood alkalie level change.
your poem ....was interesting
Good advice.
A great poem about living life to the fullest and experiencing diverse adventures.
I've always
hated that "Just Do It" thing, but I like your way much better. All the 'but firsts" are what make the 'doing it' worthwhile. I liked this. Thanks, LJ.
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