All Comments on 'It Has Led to Dancing'

and hilarious!

Really enjoyed this sexy, funny romp x

Wonderful story! I hope there's more?????

It really was a long walk for a short drink of water, wasn’t it?

The stakes for these characters were far too low to facilitate this degree of melodramatic hysteria.

Very well thought out and written I need to read more of your work. Keep up the good work.

Great story hope there is much re to come

I need more. This is incredible and would love to explore her further exploration of bodily pleasures

another good story. My one criticism would be that there is too much build up in comparison to the short ending

Please work on the sequel

normal size tits would have still fit the story and been more realistic. Maybe it’s just me because I’m more of a nubile fan but my point is the unrealistic detail stuck in my brain and no matter how I tried I couldn’t help picturing her as fat.

The richness and depth you put into your characters MORE than makes up for the lengthy prologue. Totally awesome!!!

Please write a sequel. I love both of these characters.

I love it! So juicy, so fun-loving, easy to let plausibility fly out of the window and just enjoy the hot sex and the amazing awakening to its possibilities.

Please. Loved it!

How in the world did I miss this when it was first posted???? Oh well. I'm just glad I finally stumbled across it.

Thanks for sharing. Awesome to see the transformation of Sally told so well.

Not sure how to edit my previous comment, Lexx, so sorry for the two comments.

Absolutely love the edited version! The ending is priceless. Any hope for a sequel? Sally is a great character!

Second read. Better than the first! Still 5* cause the meter doesn't go higher

Wonderful story but the ending was "premature"?!?!? I truly appreciate you as a writer, though.

Good premise.

But 48EEE tits? You lost me there and I stopped reading.

One star.

Also 2nd read and every bit as good as first -!

I find very smart very sexy and she took to everything Dana enjoys/can dish out like a duck to water...Sally's great!

PLUS she has a full muffin...