All Comments on 'Mom's Friend in a Short Skirt'

Excellent story. Very arousing.

need a lot more chapters and more detail!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...we mostly use English here. Your "writing" leaves much to be desired! Perhaps go off and learn to spell before submitting anything else.

She most likely end up pregnant by him too

editor editor editor

I loved how quick it happened and how he just took her!! Teach her for teasing a young, hard cock!!

Short, sweet, and hot! Would have enjoyed another round or two of Tammy getting fucked and/or sucking cock and eating cum.

You must edit! I only gave the story two stars. It wasn’t because I didn’t like the storyline it was because the editing was so bad that it completely distracted me from the story. Complete wrong words were used regularly. This author is too good to be submitting stories like this. He has a great imagination and I like looking forward to seeing what he’s turning out. So far, he’s always managed to get my attention. But the story disappointed me with all the errors.

It has a good idea going for it but just didn't make the mark. I first gave it 4 but then decided that was too much but Lit wouldn't let me change.

My mom’s friend Denise is almost ten years younger than her, so only ten years older than me. She used to tease me as I was growing up and sometimes would spread her legs and flash me then smile and wink. I began teasing her back. I would come in and her and mom would be sitting at the table drinking coffee. I would walk up behind mom, kiss her cheek then say hi to Denise. At the same time I would grab my dick through my basketball shorts. It would get hard and then poke out of the bottom. Denise would try to play it cool but I caught her licking her lips a few times. The best was the time I was supposed to be working and came home to find them sunbathing and drinking sangria. When Denise came in to use the restroom she was startled to see me. She came back to the kitchen and began flirting. I rubbed my dick and she asked if she could see it. I pulled my shorts down and showed her. Her hand moved down and began rubbing her pussy over her suit. Just when I thought something was going to happen, my mom yelled for her to grab some ice.

I can't recall the number of times I saw a solo capital I used in place of the word "a", among several other mistakes!