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Nice ...
... to see you back.
Fun story
Thanks for the mad, fun ride. Keep writing.
Wierd. I mean that in the best possible way.
Fine wierdness. I identify completely.
I'd have given it a perfect score if you hadn't typed "their" for "there" in Chapter 1.
-Z.
opened my mind~
I never realized that zen and conusor are so intertwined, I read this story cause the offering was a zen tale like no other, but what I see is a conusor of porn/ technical and zen being the total focus and one set mind to search. Not what I was expecting but then again in zen, no expectations no disappointments (~_~)Now if you want zen? in the poetry forum ~~ zen mountain~
Excellent...
Entertaining, yet oddly perceptive story.
Cheers,
-I.
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