Story was good! But way to short! It was hot! Round 2 please!
Thanks for writing!
the build-up to the "climax" is great....I loved every word
You have to continue this story. The only negative thing I can say is that the story was just too short. I want to read even more.
Story was great!!! Just too damned short!!! Come on, give us some more of this couple!!
mmmmm very good, cant wait for another chapter
You said this was his oldest daughter....more
naughty, very naughty ;)
Another great short story from Geromino. Loved that the lust and sex overcame Sam's moral dilemma and he got to fuck his daughter and that she reciprocated.
That would have been a perfect title...lol. Very nice. You have some nice transitions from one thought to the other person's thoughts. Nicely done. I'd like to read more.
He must succumb to that temptation again. Well written, great build, loved it. Need more.
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