All Comments on 'The Publican's Daughter'

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sexmatesexmateabout 19 years ago
Nice!

Story was good! But way to short! It was hot! Round 2 please!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Big DDaughter

Hot! More!!

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
wonderful

the build-up to the "climax" is great....I loved every word

songman60songman60about 19 years ago
A Father's Love

You have to continue this story. The only negative thing I can say is that the story was just too short. I want to read even more.

tinman69stinman69sover 18 years ago
Got to have more of this!!!

Story was great!!! Just too damned short!!! Come on, give us some more of this couple!!

snowhugssnowhugsover 18 years ago
:)

mmmmm very good, cant wait for another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
More

You said this was his oldest daughter....more

goodgurlgetsbadgoodgurlgetsbadover 12 years ago

naughty, very naughty ;)

fireguy365fireguy365almost 12 years ago
Hot and Hard

Another great short story from Geromino. Loved that the lust and sex overcame Sam's moral dilemma and he got to fuck his daughter and that she reciprocated.

beguiled999beguiled999almost 11 years ago
Cum on the Door

That would have been a perfect title...lol. Very nice. You have some nice transitions from one thought to the other person's thoughts. Nicely done. I'd like to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Give into temptation

He must succumb to that temptation again. Well written, great build, loved it. Need more.

sp9983sp9983over 2 years ago

Waiting for part two.

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