All Comments on 'Suddenly Single Steffie Ch. 01'

Superbly written nice flow and language use.

Want to hear some more about Stefi, want to fuck Jack after losing he boyfriend, but cives the cunt to Calvin, very interesting. this is a good read, because it makaes you think.

but the story was the stuff of very good dreams. You are a fantastic storyteller Opels. Keep it up!

It’s a little rushed in places which disrupts the flow of the story but it’s not too jarring. This is a very sensual erotic story these three housemates are destined to be a beautiful mfm.

Thanks for sharing, I’m looking forward to reading more.

Tess (UK)

This is a decent porno script but writing for readers (and not viewers) should be better than this. The transition from attraction to sexual activity is all but skipped and the play by play in the sex has no emotion. That said, I still want to see where it goes - now that we’ve established that she is open for business with both of them.