Naughty cousins!! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters... Bri
Good start, I await more and how things progress.
Ok so they don't get the "red" treatment. But...they are absolutely essential if the rest of the story is to flow and have the impact the author intended. I am a sucker for a good set-up.
A little short, hopefully more to come!
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Cant wait to see where it goes...
Naughty cousins!! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters...
Bri
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Good start, I await more and how things progress.
Setups that start the sissssszle
Ok so they don't get the "red" treatment. But...they are absolutely essential if the rest of the story is to flow and have the impact the author intended. I am a sucker for a good set-up.
Good Start....
A little short, hopefully more to come!
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