All Comments on 'Collateral Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Amazong

As if I could like Klaus and Jake anymore than I already do! This was a very sweet chapter and intriguing to see Klaus' inner working as to why he wanted to hear Jake say those words so much. I kind of wish I hadn't read this chapter yet as now I'm desperate for the next. I guess I'll start from the beginning again to keep me busy. Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story Laura you truly are a talented writer.

- Nina.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Soooo Good

I am about to say something and this is meant as a compliment. You would do very well in the field of "Torture". You give us just enough, which mind you, is never enough. You are truly a talented writer, your ability to capture the emotions of your characters and weave them together with the sequence of events is no small feat. Thank you for sharing this amazing story with us. I can't wait to see where this leads.

Ozz

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Keep Going!!

I luv it man!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Oh, this is getting good

Bring it on. Can’t wait for your next installment. Thank you.

AKA983AKA983almost 6 years ago
Wonderful writer

Thank you so much for this story i can't waiting for the last upcoming chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wonderful

I'm so glad I finally realised you were on Patreon I was just way too impatient to wait for anymore chapters, so realising the finished book was on Patreon was a tea blessing. Collateral is an absolutely wonderful story and I can honestly say there is nothing I would change about it ❤️

- Nina

catamitecatamitealmost 6 years ago

What a wonderful read. Looking forward to much more.

PureExoticaPureExoticaover 2 years ago

I'm holding my breath for the inevitable incoming conflict

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Happy to discover this with so many more chapters to read. Totally hooked in November 2021. Timeless. ...

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