it was good but please write some more i want to know how she gets whats coming to her
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Anonymous12/08/07
disbelief
I cannot believe there is only one public comment.
The idea isn't original but how many are? The author is a very good storyteller and deserves far better support. Please keep submitting, Charley. Thank you.
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Anonymous02/04/08
Why not be honest
I've read many of your stories and think you write very well, but this story confuses me. Why doesn't he just confront her with the pictures he has seen instead of beating around the bush?
60 year old George
the photos will be the revenge - primarily against the two senior partners. I hope he divorces her and gets: custody of the kids, the house, child support, and (perhaps) alimony. That would be nice revenge - along with ruining the senior partners's marriages.
English
revenge
it was good but please write some more i want to know how she gets whats coming to her
disbelief
I cannot believe there is only one public comment.
The idea isn't original but how many are? The author is a very good storyteller and deserves far better support. Please keep submitting, Charley. Thank you.
Why not be honest
I've read many of your stories and think you write very well, but this story confuses me. Why doesn't he just confront her with the pictures he has seen instead of beating around the bush?
60 year old George
AS IN WAR AND BATTLES
INCOMING. TK U MLJ LV NV
AS IN THE GLAD-HE-ATE-HER DAYS
the lions are roaring TK U MLJ LV NV
I presume
the photos will be the revenge - primarily against the two senior partners. I hope he divorces her and gets: custody of the kids, the house, child support, and (perhaps) alimony. That would be nice revenge - along with ruining the senior partners's marriages.
TOO MANY CHANCES
leaving too many choices, none that benefits you. TK U MLJ LV NV
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cuck shit.
Kind of a wimp
But good writing.
UGH!!!!!
Your a weak, sick fucker!!!
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