by Willow Rain
have an R in my life...who ispires me...but in a different way...this , a touching warm sigh for a past whispered moment ...left in the mind of a dreamer...beautiful...blue
Nice contrasts here... filled with emotions... seems to be the thing.. Muses floating in and out.. untouchable except for the pen flowing on parchment...nice write..ty
Du Lac~
This is a very nice line: "And I want to pour words all around you like sunshine,"
Some really wonderful phrases here, willow: "count your petals" etc. This has great potential!
Your poem could be tailor made for My "R" as the lines, "And I want to pour words all around you like sunshine, but I clip my heart short" struck home in a deep way. Held and unspoken feelings will be the death of Me yet. Thank you for the wake up call with this poem, Willow
beautiful and exquisite. I love how you expressed this. Thank you
This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>
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