by LuciousBi-Writes4U
you really captured the passion, rising heat, and climax in this one! Iloved it!
Vividly captures every mounting level of a passionate interlude. Loved it!
stunning imagery of two people together ... showing ...not telling....:)
WARM, WET(FLUIDS ON SKIN), AND INVITING...JUST THE WAY IT SHOULD BE!!
<KISSES>
a lovely little truthful poem! Please continue with more of them?