All Comments on 'The Look'

but ignoring that and just looking at the poem, it's pretty good.

These two stanzas really work for me:

The hook

Those looks

He reads her as an open book

The hook

That he took

To read the open book

These stanzas are like the chorus in a song--the best part.

great poem, and great pics too...

like the way the stanza's play...

...two with nails <grin> wow where did you get the model <smile> oh yea the poem was great but awesome pic <chuckleBONE>

Nice inviting poem and the photos were a great added touch.

the look is a hook, no doubt about it

lol, BD

cute, quirky, fun and fun to look at all at once...what more could you ask for??

keep 'em cumming!!

the poem is great...but the illustrations fit it perfectly...what a sultry sexy look...devilish thoughts are going through that pretty head!!

i have to say, i was barely paying attention to the poem, i was way too distracted by your gorgeous pics!

you're such a hottie =)

*HUGS*

THE LOOK AND THE HOOK!!

very nicely done LB.

You had me at that first sultry look of passion. While the rendering was spectacular ~ the view was devine. Utterly mesmerizing!

With a look like that, it'll turn any man into a confirmed bookworm.

With a look like that, it'll turn any man into a confirmed bookworm.

the classic lines protude. TK U MLJ LV NV