Like all your stories, babydollface. I enjoy each one better than the last, or is it that when I get to read a new one, the old one has been read many times?
This story is so indescribable, it has to be one of the best stories erotic or not that I have ever read. I am patiently waiting for another story. I think you should write a novel, a romantic erotic novel. I believe it would become a best seller. And if you did. I would surley spend quite a bit of money on it, you can be sure of it.
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Anonymous07/18/08
I'm not into vampire stories but..
this has to be the most erotic vampire story that I have ever read. You should make this into a series. Patrick and Belle are a perfect match for each other. I'm waiting for Chapter 2 thru 100. Wolfmann
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Anonymous04/03/12
Interesting.
The overall story seemed quite good, but it lacked a certain emotional status. You need to add more detail into the story, even though this is basically a text porn website, sometimes more is needed to intensify the journey. Good work all around :3
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Brilliant
Like all your stories, babydollface. I enjoy each one better than the last, or is it that when I get to read a new one, the old one has been read many times?
world rocking
very sexy and moving...I'd love to be taken like that
Breath taking
This story is so indescribable, it has to be one of the best stories erotic or not that I have ever read. I am patiently waiting for another story. I think you should write a novel, a romantic erotic novel. I believe it would become a best seller. And if you did. I would surley spend quite a bit of money on it, you can be sure of it.
I'm not into vampire stories but..
this has to be the most erotic vampire story that I have ever read. You should make this into a series. Patrick and Belle are a perfect match for each other. I'm waiting for Chapter 2 thru 100. Wolfmann
Interesting.
The overall story seemed quite good, but it lacked a certain emotional status. You need to add more detail into the story, even though this is basically a text porn website, sometimes more is needed to intensify the journey. Good work all around :3
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