by babydollface
Like all your stories, babydollface. I enjoy each one better than the last, or is it that when I get to read a new one, the old one has been read many times?
This story is so indescribable, it has to be one of the best stories erotic or not that I have ever read. I am patiently waiting for another story. I think you should write a novel, a romantic erotic novel. I believe it would become a best seller. And if you did. I would surley spend quite a bit of money on it, you can be sure of it.
this has to be the most erotic vampire story that I have ever read. You should make this into a series. Patrick and Belle are a perfect match for each other. I'm waiting for Chapter 2 thru 100. Wolfmann
The overall story seemed quite good, but it lacked a certain emotional status. You need to add more detail into the story, even though this is basically a text porn website, sometimes more is needed to intensify the journey. Good work all around :3