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All Comments on 'Petals'

by LuciousBi-Writes4U

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
nice flow

nice flow of words ...kinda makes you think in sepia tones and of old lace and photographs....

love the last line

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
good

short, sweet and to the point

We2andmaybeUWe2andmaybeUabout 19 years ago
good

love the word play... flowing sounds...

great and short

~photoguy~~photoguy~about 19 years ago
well done !!

yummy .. nice imagery, great work!!

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
petal

a drift~

cute poem~ great word play

excellent literary Art~

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Beautiful.

Nicely conveys drifting and delicate sensuality.

sexmatesexmateabout 19 years ago
Nice words

I can smell the sensuality!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
NOW THAT'S EROTIC...

and steamy, sensual what an image and a feeling you convey here, i got goose bumps as i felt the soft touch of the petals on my skin...

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