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Always something worth pondering.
I enjoyed this very much. Great strength in writing vivid
words.
L~
Thought provoking.
This made me think in terms of two inseparable people who've grown together and the eventual tragic loss of one of them, leaving the other to stand alone. Powerful imagery!
thought provoking....
imaginative, powerful and poignant!
loved it...
leaves...
me deep in this one. great imagination and super imagery all throughout.
**5**
Powerful imagery on at least two levels. Great work.
YES
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