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by Anonymous

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by Syndra Lynn03/16/05

subtle

but not vague.

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by WickedEve03/16/05

I actually

got a cool little image in my head. lol

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by Anonymous03/17/05

Tiger

relaxing, sounds like you!

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by My Erotic Tale03/17/05

Nope~

I am not the tiger nor the crane in this poem! Keep guessing

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by Bridget6903/17/05

Nice.

Offers both a relaxing yet menacing image at the same time. Great visual dynamics of the hunter and the hunted.

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by dcpoet4403/17/05

intriguing.....

as it leaves me pondering over different conceptual conclusions. what first comes to mind is: it's multiple choice to the reader and a nice laid out trap by the writer. at least one rather unusual look at it. i'll be reading this one for a few days.

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by Anonymous03/19/05

Enjoyment.

A wonderfully reading poem. Art knows how to wrap words around to make enjoyment seem effortless for us.
~A

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