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Plus linda
I suppose adding Linda is out of the question?
no way she stays
Straight
Similar resl life True cheater Helena Montana area
Facebook postings have info that coat her that job. Funy 3rd husband keeps siffing pantied filled with lover seed
Profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com on Facebook has details
superman?
Not hardly.
Hell, Clark 'Wimp Extraordinaire' Kent makes this guy look wimpy
Scores of overs for 3 of 5 years married and doesn't even try to balance scales...thinking the author has erectile dysfunction of brain
Not as good as the first part.
How many men was she fucking over the course of 3 years?
In his own bed?
The ending left something to be desired.
Entertaining Story and Comments
First, this is an entertaining story. Risq posted a long and thoughtful comment about how unrealistic the plot is, which is a valid point of view, but I agree with Hawkeye that this is more in the vein of light hearted satirical entertainment. Second, several have commented a out the wife not being able to change. This is probably valid. I have a friend who is a psychiatrist, and he says that he can coach a narcissistic person through a situation, but if the same situation happens two years later, he will have to coach them again. So unless the wife gets a large amount of help and support, she isn't going to make it. Third, KK commented that the story reads well the second time and I agree with him. RPS is indeed an excellent writer.
This is not really an ending, it's just as incomplete as the first chapter.
That aside, it boggles the mind that the husband would stay married to a serial cheater who has fucked a bunch of men for over half of their marriage.
Well
You certainly wrote a story about two people who deserve one another, no one can take that away from you at least.
Divorce Her
Once a cheater, always a cheater....he'd be better off without her.
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