All Comments on 'You Owe Me'

Gee nice story, whats next blackmail?

This was painful to read. There was no flow to it, I was never allowed to enjoy the story, because I was constantly being reminded that I was reading a story. On another note, you managed to use almost every tired cliche' in the book. I seriously recommend you seek out,find, and use an editor. I'm sorry for the harshness of my comments, but this is not a good story.

I have to agree with A in USA - there was no flow, nothing that kept my interest - I actually scrolled down and skimmed the story rather than read it.

what the heck were you thinking while writing this piece of garbage. i hate it. the story has no flow to it and it not interesting at all