All Comments on 'Doctor or Master Ch. 2'

or at least someone to check your spelling.

What the fuck do you mean "inside of my clit"? You do realize that the clitoris isn't a hole don't you??? The hell?? Also tons of spelling mistakes.

However without wishing to appear rude or mean it seems that English isn’t your first language. As such there are huge gaps in your story, the grammar and sentence structure leave a lot to be desired. In short the story is unreadable. There is plenty of room for improvement if you can find a good editor.