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The City Screams In Whispers

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by Anonymous

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by flyguy6903/18/05

I want the tie-dye one

that says "Angeline's Fan Club"!

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by My Erotic Tale03/19/05

grasshopper

you are very wise~

we are all acorns fallen from an Oak tree
is it fate that we have landed so close together and met
or just dumb luck (~_~)

either way, a 'chirping' good poem~
I loved the grasshoppers song~

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by Maria239403/19/05

mmmm, mmm

knows why would I want these
fractures of displaced air to bloom


now that would be an awesome sight!! wonderful description angeline, really nice :)

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by WickedEve03/21/05

I like:

"fractures of displaced air to bloom
into knowing your cracked coffee mug"

Good poem.

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