You know, everywhere on this site, writers talk of people fucking. You are one of those very rare authors here who writes of "making love". There is such an enormous difference. Thank you, again. Regards, Michael.
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Anonymous04/18/12
Loved It!
I can't believe this story didn't get more comments! This was a wonderful story and I loved the connection between her and her father. It's nice to read a story with love as well as sex and not tons of sex with no emotions with oftentimes is the standard.
Dunno if more is coming or not, but I really enjoyed this. I could see these characters and the lives they led. I look forward to reading of how the family business "expands" with a next generation of chocolateers.
Writerjab is right this was an excellent story just reading it made me sweat.
But i would really like the story to continue on. Really draw it on. I wanna know about the buisness venture, do they become a family. Please you must continue this.
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Anonymous03/26/14
wow!
TRULY A GREAT STORY. I AGREE WITH ALL THE COMMENTS HERE. I WISH THE WRITER WOULD CONTINUE MORE.
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Another Outstanding Series ...
You know, everywhere on this site, writers talk of people fucking. You are one of those very rare authors here who writes of "making love". There is such an enormous difference. Thank you, again. Regards, Michael.
Loved It!
I can't believe this story didn't get more comments! This was a wonderful story and I loved the connection between her and her father. It's nice to read a story with love as well as sex and not tons of sex with no emotions with oftentimes is the standard.
Great series!
Dunno if more is coming or not, but I really enjoyed this. I could see these characters and the lives they led. I look forward to reading of how the family business "expands" with a next generation of chocolateers.
Agreed!
Writerjab is right this was an excellent story just reading it made me sweat.
But i would really like the story to continue on. Really draw it on. I wanna know about the buisness venture, do they become a family. Please you must continue this.
wow!
TRULY A GREAT STORY. I AGREE WITH ALL THE COMMENTS HERE. I WISH THE WRITER WOULD CONTINUE MORE.
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