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All Comments on 'Teaching Mirabella a New Skill'

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44chicken44chickenover 5 years ago
Hmmmm

How is this mind control? Characters need some motivation. Technically good, but a bit lacking in terms of storytelling.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Where was the mind control?

A good start to a standard seduction story, but it ended abruptly, and had no mind control whatsoever. It would probably rank higher in another category.

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