I think this story has some good promise. It was a quick set up for the rest but a very good one. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
by
Anonymous03/27/05
Yes
She must be gangbanged by at least twenty men with 10-12" cocks with at least one guy with a 15" coke can size. He is black and knocks her up with twins. Hubby sucks her used cunt after each gangband and raises 9 little bastard pickininny boys. When they get old enough, they fuck their momma too and hubby puts all through university while he "loves" his wife SOOOO much
by
Anonymous03/27/05
great start
Very good start to this story, I would really like a continuation with a slow build up to the sex part
by
Anonymous03/27/05
wonderful start
Baby, this is a wonderful start, the slow exhibitionism of it. Her being exposed. Nice touch her walking back after the shoot without her robe. I like where this is going, so please second chapter. Kisses
On her next visit Hubby can't go with her she goes and there are several men present, things get out of hand. Hubby gets finished early and decides to join the wife,when he arrives he is able to view whats happing inside without being seen, and decides to find out if this has ever happend before and would the wife be honest with him about all that he had seen after she arrives home. Please take it from there Woody Woodwood. Great Story So Far Supper Job On The Writing!!! Will Be Waiting.
On her next visit Hubby can't go with her she goes and there are several men present, things get out of hand. Hubby gets finished early and decides to join the wife,when he arrives he is able to view whats happing inside without being seen, and decides to find out if this has ever happend before and would the wife be honest with him about all that he had seen after she arrives home. Please take it from there Woody Woodwood. Great Story So Far Supper Job On The Writing!!! Will Be Waiting.
by
Anonymous03/28/05
stupidity contest
If your purpose was to write a story about two stupid perverts and take a poll to decide which one was dumber, you succeeded. I vote for husband who is not only stupid but a wimp who watches the boys feel his wife up and then pays them. Wife is just stupid and naive which is not quite as bad. I would suggest you try a different profession the Ct. Yankee.
by
Anonymous03/28/05
12 Year Old Author and cuckolding tail
Say Woody you shouldn't type with just one hand - it takes you back to jr. high lusts and doesn't do much for the attempted story of cuckolding. Although by several of the comments you got to a few jaded sickies.
Unless, you are more sick and sorid then them, you should realize that but a few readers here like males to be demeaned and disrespected by themselves, the author or their slut wife. Wussie wimpy is hardly erotic - just crude and inhumanely unrealistic.
If you persist move it to Fetish or Science Fiction where it may be appreciated by those there. Thanks
by
Anonymous03/28/05
Good start
Never mind the limp dick critics. You have a good start for a fun story. Keep it up!
by
Anonymous03/28/05
All we gotta do
with these limp dicked crap stories is vote "1" and move quietly on.
by
Anonymous03/28/05
nice one
great start, keep up the good work
by
Anonymous03/29/05
Like it
would get seriously turned on if it was my wife - please write a follow up
by
Anonymous03/31/05
Very Good 1st Chapter
Woody,
The percentage of comments are positive. Keep the story going,forget about pleasing everyone. Tell your story your way,the way you want. You got us on the edge of our seats,don't leave us hanging like you did in the 1st section of your story.
Like all godd fantasies, it's based on some reality. I identify with the story because I sunbath nude in France and Spain and enjoy it too. Finish the story, it's fun
by
Anonymous04/30/08
Can't wait for the next scenes!
As for the responses of demure ladies to this kind of manipulation, it wouldn't take much in many women of my esxperience to release a covert volcano of passion.
by
Anonymous06/14/08
I have to comment on this
It's ok to write about ones wife getting fucked but when you insult the readers intelligence is's too much. When I went back and found the other two guys there i would have said to either lose them of me and my wife were history. This is the most worn out p
plot in existence where the wife comes to model and there are two other horndogs there with the photographer. Can't you be original. Look the first visit a woman was there to throw the couple off. What happened to her. The photographer was pimping the wife out..."Oh yeah come on over and act like you are professional then fuck the shit out of her...by the way that will be a hundred each" Bull shit and more bullshit...The husband had to be the dumbiest dufus i=on the planet not to have see this. I didn't read the rest of your fucking puke series but I can just imagine where he is shocked to see his wife reacting...You wrote a setup..you nothing writer...go get a job...marriedwithballs@yahoo.com
by
Anonymous10/08/10
Yes
Excellent story
by
Anonymous04/29/11
More PLEASE
Loved it as far as it went. Wish it could go much farther, much farther.
Love to see my wife posing and being touched and more by several men.
by
Anonymous04/29/11
Read first sentence and stopped
I can only imagine where this sick story is going. No thanks, I'll pass.
English
nice start
I think this story has some good promise. It was a quick set up for the rest but a very good one. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
Yes
She must be gangbanged by at least twenty men with 10-12" cocks with at least one guy with a 15" coke can size. He is black and knocks her up with twins. Hubby sucks her used cunt after each gangband and raises 9 little bastard pickininny boys. When they get old enough, they fuck their momma too and hubby puts all through university while he "loves" his wife SOOOO much
great start
Very good start to this story, I would really like a continuation with a slow build up to the sex part
wonderful start
Baby, this is a wonderful start, the slow exhibitionism of it. Her being exposed. Nice touch her walking back after the shoot without her robe. I like where this is going, so please second chapter. Kisses
I was the walrus!
Paul wasn't the walrus! I was the walrus! --John
more please
more, more, more, please!
thanks
Marty
Things Get Out Of Hand!!!
On her next visit Hubby can't go with her she goes and there are several men present, things get out of hand. Hubby gets finished early and decides to join the wife,when he arrives he is able to view whats happing inside without being seen, and decides to find out if this has ever happend before and would the wife be honest with him about all that he had seen after she arrives home. Please take it from there Woody Woodwood. Great Story So Far Supper Job On The Writing!!! Will Be Waiting.
Things Get Out Of Hand!!!
On her next visit Hubby can't go with her she goes and there are several men present, things get out of hand. Hubby gets finished early and decides to join the wife,when he arrives he is able to view whats happing inside without being seen, and decides to find out if this has ever happend before and would the wife be honest with him about all that he had seen after she arrives home. Please take it from there Woody Woodwood. Great Story So Far Supper Job On The Writing!!! Will Be Waiting.
stupidity contest
If your purpose was to write a story about two stupid perverts and take a poll to decide which one was dumber, you succeeded. I vote for husband who is not only stupid but a wimp who watches the boys feel his wife up and then pays them. Wife is just stupid and naive which is not quite as bad. I would suggest you try a different profession the Ct. Yankee.
12 Year Old Author and cuckolding tail
Say Woody you shouldn't type with just one hand - it takes you back to jr. high lusts and doesn't do much for the attempted story of cuckolding. Although by several of the comments you got to a few jaded sickies.
Unless, you are more sick and sorid then them, you should realize that but a few readers here like males to be demeaned and disrespected by themselves, the author or their slut wife. Wussie wimpy is hardly erotic - just crude and inhumanely unrealistic.
If you persist move it to Fetish or Science Fiction where it may be appreciated by those there. Thanks
Good start
Never mind the limp dick critics. You have a good start for a fun story. Keep it up!
All we gotta do
with these limp dicked crap stories is vote "1" and move quietly on.
nice one
great start, keep up the good work
Like it
would get seriously turned on if it was my wife - please write a follow up
Very Good 1st Chapter
Woody,
The percentage of comments are positive. Keep the story going,forget about pleasing everyone. Tell your story your way,the way you want. You got us on the edge of our seats,don't leave us hanging like you did in the 1st section of your story.
A fun fantasy
Like all godd fantasies, it's based on some reality. I identify with the story because I sunbath nude in France and Spain and enjoy it too. Finish the story, it's fun
Can't wait for the next scenes!
As for the responses of demure ladies to this kind of manipulation, it wouldn't take much in many women of my esxperience to release a covert volcano of passion.
I have to comment on this
It's ok to write about ones wife getting fucked but when you insult the readers intelligence is's too much. When I went back and found the other two guys there i would have said to either lose them of me and my wife were history. This is the most worn out p
plot in existence where the wife comes to model and there are two other horndogs there with the photographer. Can't you be original. Look the first visit a woman was there to throw the couple off. What happened to her. The photographer was pimping the wife out..."Oh yeah come on over and act like you are professional then fuck the shit out of her...by the way that will be a hundred each" Bull shit and more bullshit...The husband had to be the dumbiest dufus i=on the planet not to have see this. I didn't read the rest of your fucking puke series but I can just imagine where he is shocked to see his wife reacting...You wrote a setup..you nothing writer...go get a job...marriedwithballs@yahoo.com
Yes
Excellent story
More PLEASE
Loved it as far as it went. Wish it could go much farther, much farther.
Love to see my wife posing and being touched and more by several men.
Read first sentence and stopped
I can only imagine where this sick story is going. No thanks, I'll pass.
Read first sentence.......
"1" !!!
sexy
Absolutely enjoyable
Great beginning
An excellent start. No one just dives into multiple partner sex, it's a process and so far you're doing a great job illuminating that process.
Great job
You have talent my friend. Please don't let this be your last. I am looking forward to another chapter.
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