by trigkerrik
I like these stories, perhaps alittle more length would be good but still well done,
whats behind the door??!?
I thought both of your KotOR stories were really great, I can't wait to read the next one. Keep 'em coming!
Again, that was a great story. Perhaps a bit more detail though. Don't be afraid to make the story longer to pull that off, as it is more than good enough to keep the reader interested.
Looking forward to seeing more! Keep them commin'!
That was interesting how you made Visas manipulate Mira and Atton although it is a bit out of her character.
And where is Kreia? She should also be on board.
And please don't tell me that you will make Brianna have "sex" with HK!
I play this game myself. i have read both of your entries and anxiously wait for the next one :P
great use of detail from the game in your stories. I hope kreia will not make an appearance. old much?
I want more! This is brilliant and I have the game so I can imagine all that is going on reallly well...
ive read this series in the past and enjoy the game im eagerly awaiting what you have in store next please finish the series