All Comments on 'Amante XIV'

is some of your best work.

breathtaking....blue

vivid images from tongue tossiled words in a rythym smoother than a silken flowing river on a journey of words that amazed me <grin> very nice poem!

can find the words to express what I feel when I read these.

I see them being written hundreds of years ago, on parchment with a quill by a woman of noble birth about her young lover.

they capture a sense of time and timelessness if such a thing is possible

Haven't you released this as a poetry volume?

I'd buy it.

But on second thought, LitE might be the perfect medium to those who rarely buy poetry books.

You are officially the best poet I've ever found. My eternal gratitude.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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