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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/28/05

Weirdly Good

Its warped... and I like that. Would be nice to see what happened before to cause it, and if the character ever develops.

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by Anonymous03/29/05

something different, something blue.

something different, something blue.

I liked it :-)

TabithaKat.

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by Noira05/01/08

Haunting

...And very different. It was a bit tricky to follow in places and I would've loved to see it fleshed out a lot more, it has the makings of an obsessively facinating story. A bit of mind play, a bit of taunting... and very creepy.

Excellently done.

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