All Comments on 'Amber Eyes'

by sihaya

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Outstanding job

Please tell me another chapter to this is upcoming

CliterateDykeCliterateDykeover 5 years ago

Outstanding. I'm utterly stunned at your ability to paint this story. And yeah, of course she's a vampire because she must be. Wow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

oh wow what a story you wove here. you had me transfixed. oh please more. thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Love it :)

Lovely and very atmospheric; well done! You capture the eroticism of tribbing really well.

AnonymousWriter244AnonymousWriter244over 5 years ago
Beautiful!

Yes! This is Erotic Horror. You explore the psyche of the victim (?) in such an artistic way. She is not assimilating what is happening to her, she just wants to feel it over and over again in a downward spiral of self destruction. Amazing job!

kristaoconnorskristaoconnorsover 5 years ago
Agreed

Indeed, I would hope that there would be a follow up chapter.

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