A superb story in every aspect. I've been reading the stories here for years and this is without doubt one of the finest ever. Please, continue it but do so in the vein that it began - subtle, honest and understated. Try nt to go over the top with it - there are all sorts of wonderful elements in it on every level. Congratulations and please please keep them coming!
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A superb story in every aspect. I've been reading the stories here for years and this is without doubt one of the finest ever. Please, continue it but do so in the vein that it began - subtle, honest and understated. Try nt to go over the top with it - there are all sorts of wonderful elements in it on every level. Congratulations and please please keep them coming!
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