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very unique phrase
spring falls down
in droplets from the gunmetal sky. even though It broke my flow..it was cleverly placed...thanks...blue
Lovely Spring poem
You weave wonderful words.
(but I believe you may have meant "altar.")
Lovely images. Thanks
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Your poem is mentioned on the New Poetry Review thread for Tuesday 22nd March.
The perfect poem...
to commemorate this time of year and the anticipated reawakening of nature.
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The feel and smell of growth is conveyed, your poem is spring.
gunmetal sky
I love that phrase. It describes it perfectly.
The last verse is wonderful in itself.
Nice job
very nice....
sabina...i can tell that you want spring as badly as i do. i'll be offering my version also. i can also say, it's fresh perspective as it's not one i've seen on the seasons. nice job!!!
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