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by WickedEve03/23/05

well written

and an interesting read. Intriguing story. The poem could have ended with "to layers of emotion I can only guess at." Though, I did enjoy it all. Thank you for giving me something different to read. :)

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by flyguy6903/24/05

Very good

Perhaps I read these in the wrong order-- is this the first chapter?

Wonderful images again, but you belabor some points-- tell this same story in half the words (assuming the right half!) and you will have an excellent poem.

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