All Comments on 'Fantasm Caning'

by Willow Rain

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flyguy69flyguy69almost 19 years ago
Ho...ly... Shit!

This one sings like the cane! Good God, Willow, I'm gonna need a break before reading the rest of this series.

Some stunning images: "Legs like poured cream", "I am curled toes,/And twined fingers" etc.

Even so, I think this one could be edited, and you are clearly good enough to do it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Vivid

reads like a memory to me. Very hot. Thank you ;)

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