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Fine Line Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/29/06

continue please!!!!!!!!

I love this story! Really hot

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by duddle14609/29/06

Fascinating!

Guy meets girl in a dark secluded section of the library and as other students are studying the two engage in some hot and steamy erotic action. Something about doing it in a dark place does appeal to the erotic senses.

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by Anonymous06/23/09

Fascinating

This is the most fascinating exploration of the human body and mind that I have read on here in all my travels through this site. You have a fantastic, rolling style and your imagery is top-quality. Very, very, very good. I look forward to whenever there is more.

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